The Night of the Yellow Butterflies

This story was one that i disliked. The reason this was is that the story was all over talking about past and present it seemed at least. The main character Doyle also seemed to be a very complex character. He seemed to have alot of aspect in his life, hes talking about the coaching job, and is always talking about drinking, and about baseball. It seemed to me that the story was not very focused and more or less "everywhere". One minute they are talking about his past career and the next there talking about butterflies or a pop fly over the second. In all i did not like the story very much.